I prefer the 2nd version over the first. I'd say both are good but this one seem to have more variation in the first bit of the melody than the first version. Feels less dragged out. :p
haha exactly. It didn't really sounded like anything you could remember as a melody. I only really liked the last 8 bars of the melody, so i kept these. The rest i changed.
I'm in love with the melody! You can keep listening to it over and over again. It flows through my mind so well. I think the ending fits well with the beggining so you don't really realise when the melody is over :) In my opinion, i would add a greasy bass in the background along with the pad(s)/synth, or whatever its called:O Nice job!
Oh that is actually a good idea 0.o, gonna try that.
Also, thanks for the warm compliment about my melody :D means a lot.
Don't you think the first stage of the melodie is a bit.. boring compared to the second ?
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